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So...funny story. I've finished this novel, but it's in past tense, so I'm changing tenses and editing each chapter before I post, so sorry for the delay but the stories ...

5000 used to be my upper limit, but now I keep it around 2-3000.

Thank you. I've been working really hard to separate it from harry Potter since I new the genre meant I was in danger of coming to close, so it's comforting ...

I don't believe you were too harsh, just honest, and your understanding of writing and style have been absolutely amazing. I always appreciate your reviews!

Thanks again, you are utterly amazing as always. You're right about physical description, I always forget about that. And I'll work on clarifying things...

Thanks dearest, I'll work through these kinks. The purpose of this chapter was too establish Lucian's palce in the social order, and also get things going between the warlocks and ...

Thank you. Here you've hit on one of my biggest concerns with this book, Lucian. I beleive he's a well developed character, because I know why he does everything he ...

Thank you, this is exactly what I needed. :)

Thanks dearest. Lucian gives a better explanation later, though there's still room for doubt. Lucian also explains the whole dating thing later. And Lucian's behavior...well, I've written a lot of ...

Thanks, again, you are a dear, and I promise I'll get to returning the favor when life's less crazy. From how I see it, Lucian's get the brain of scientist, ...

Thanks again, to answer your question, The fey and wizards kind of align against the witches and warlocks, so they're feelings toward them are similar to their feelings toward witches, ...

Thanks again, yes, Gwen and Arthur are the student body president and vice president, I'll try to clear that up...

Thanks, Once upon a time I had this thing where Tanya only invited Billie out of guilt, but I cut it out because it felt too expository, I'll try to ...

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