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  • Other » General, Narrative Re: To write or not to write

    'Nothing' is quiet beautiful, its complex and drifting, a morbid piece of poetry. Everything is nothing from a certain perspective. I really enjoy your writing, it feels personal, like we're ...

    Sat Jun 11, 2016 1:05 pm
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Evanescent

    People usually shy away from stories like this, yet, they're mostly true. I've never been able to apply my writing to a subject like this, I really admire the way ...

    Sat Jun 11, 2016 12:55 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Leftovers

    I really love when poems are simple and beautiful, yet the story behind it is complex and chaotic, I love the contradiction. The words you use are beautiful, they took ...

    Sat Jun 11, 2016 12:45 pm
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Twilight's Ecstasy

    The title caught my eye and i'm really happy it did! the poem was elegantly short, the words you used were beautifully placed and thought of, it's rhythm was perfect. ...

    Sat Jun 11, 2016 12:36 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Project Flux {Book one of the Flux Files}-Prologue and Chapter one

    The idea is awesome but you're not giving me enough detail to enjoy it! I can tell that this story is going somewhere great, the character already seems strong, someone ...

    Fri Jun 10, 2016 5:24 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Rocks

    I'll always love the way poets can make something that looks insignificant into an entire lifetime of beautiful stories and emotion. The rocks are a perfect example of that. Your ...

    Fri Jun 10, 2016 4:54 pm
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Ode to those with Mental Illness

    I really love the subject of this poem, I think your choice of words is beautiful! the only advice I have to give involves "technicality", I agree with Yams, you ...

    Fri Jun 10, 2016 4:45 pm


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