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Re: To write or not to write
'Nothing' is quiet beautiful, its complex and drifting, a morbid piece of poetry. Everything is nothing from a certain perspective. I really enjoy your writing, it feels personal, like we're ...
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Re: Evanescent
People usually shy away from stories like this, yet, they're mostly true. I've never been able to apply my writing to a subject like this, I really admire the way ...
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Re: Leftovers
I really love when poems are simple and beautiful, yet the story behind it is complex and chaotic, I love the contradiction. The words you use are beautiful, they took ...
Jun 11, 2016 -
Re: Twilight's Ecstasy
The title caught my eye and i'm really happy it did! the poem was elegantly short, the words you used were beautifully placed and thought of, it's rhythm was perfect. ...
Jun 11, 2016 -
Re: Project Flux {Book one of the Flux Files}-Prologue and Chapter one
The idea is awesome but you're not giving me enough detail to enjoy it! I can tell that this story is going somewhere great, the character already seems strong, someone ...
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Re: Rocks
I'll always love the way poets can make something that looks insignificant into an entire lifetime of beautiful stories and emotion. The rocks are a perfect example of that. Your ...
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Re: Ode to those with Mental Illness
I really love the subject of this poem, I think your choice of words is beautiful! the only advice I have to give involves "technicality", I agree with Yams, you ...
Jun 10, 2016
