arspoetica

I really like the flow of the poem but there are a couple things i would consider. I had never before. I would make it into "I never had before." ...

So first off there are a lot of typos that should be fixed. uterly powerful. Utterly needs a second t. arer mized with lust I'm sure you know what is ...

I reall like this poem. One thing you should think about is punctuation. You have it set up as one long, run on sentence. This is perfectly alright, and it ...

This piece is just as good as the first! The only mistake i saw was You honestly think you can overthrow a Queen whose birthright was the throne of Italy! ...

First off, wonderful title. Second, wonderful story. Your diction was wonderful, and the fact that you seem to know your topic very well is great, because it's hard to right ...

The flow of this poem is perfect, and the fact that every fourth line in each stanza is the same, and rhymes with the first line, it just sounds satisfying. ...

Sadistic demons are always good topics for writing! I really liked this piece and i only have two corrections “Really!” Gerard was surprised by the amount of excitement in Johnny’s ...

I live right next to a fence that has one of those shrines, and reading this I was able to picture it perfectly. Your descriptions were spot on and you ...

Alright, this chapter officially hooked me. Your writing style is perfect for this genre, and your diction is perfect for the era. Also, you did an amazing job seperating the ...

You did an amazing job with establishing the scenery right away. That is really important in a novel, as well as establishing characters, which you seemed to do well, especially ...

The main problem I had with this poem was the rhyming. I feel that if you're going to have a rhyme scheme, you should follow through with it until the ...

That was creepy. Nevertheless I thoroughly enjoyed it! I really like the idea you have going. I couldn't really find any grammatical errors, but they may still be lurking there. ...

I feel that each stanza definetly stands out on it's own, and i had a hard time connecting the overall meaning. I did notice religious motifs in most of them, ...

The structure of this piece was amazing!!!!! I love the way you kept building up the tention. At first i thought it was just going to be a depressing love ...

I think you have definetly set yourself up pretty nicely for a novel here. I have never heard of a book about all women warriors, and being unique is a ...