ardentlyThieving

Thanks for the review! I was worried it was getting too long so it's nice to see that someone disagrees with me and thinks I should've added more coz I ...

Thanks for the review! I was worried it was getting too long so it's nice to see that someone disagrees with me and thinks I should've added more coz I ...

Thanks for the review! I was worried it was getting too long so it's nice to see that someone disagrees with me and thinks I should've added more coz I ...

Thanks for the review! I was worried it was getting too long so it's nice to see that someone disagrees with me and thinks I should've added more coz I ...

Well in my opinion it works :D

Very cute! You've got a nice art style. - Ardently

Thanks for the review!! Dialogue is one of my weaker points and I'm always worried about characters having the same voice, so I do tend to skip over it as ...

No problem! Like I said, they were just suggestions. I agree that sometimes it can be better style-wise to not change things, and in the end it's up to you. ...

Yeah, that's one of the things that reminded me of it :D

Thanks for the review and the advice :) I wasn't sure if it was properly long enough to be a chapter, but I wanted to end it where I did, ...

As a pokemon go fan (TEAM INSTINCT 4 LYF!!!!) I am offended. As a pun lover I am highly amused. Good Sir/Ma'am/Turtle of Ambiguous Gender, I thank you for bringing ...