anonymousx

Hi! Great poem, first off. I tend to look deep into poetry and try to find my own meaning for things and if my thoughts are wrong, please just ignore ...

I'll start off by saying that this is beautiful. The amount of description is beautiful. I do wish that I would know what lines are from what, whether that be ...

I agree with the review below. It was definitely an interesting poem to read. Except for me I feel like it was more along the lines of saying that even ...

To be honest, I quite like this poem. It's short, quick and certainly emotional. It seems like you (or the person you're writing about) is having trouble. Of course, that ...

Definitely an interesting piece. It's very raw and very emotional. I feel as though it'd be good for slam poetry. I do agree with the other reviews about the possibility ...

I haven't read the other chapters of the story but I saw this is the green room and decided to review. You definitely have something going here. I do love ...

I will say that I'm particularly bad at giving reviews, but I assure you I'm going to try my best. I'll start with the first few paragraphs. They really draw ...

Let me just tell you how much I adored the line, "I'm from the glow stick that broke in my face, and made my blue eyes glow." I had to ...

I'm a big fan of simple poetry...not too complicated, nothing too crazy. It really captures the beach in a very simple, childish essence. I love the beach as well and ...

God, this is beautiful. I can't say enough about this. I don't even know where to start. I absolutely adore the way you capture the pause between doing something or ...

I figured since you reviewed something of mine, I'd give you one as well. The title caught my interest because that is simply how I'm feeling at the moment - ...