anneonomus

This is a really interesting concept for a short story! I like the imagery of a sculptor creating a physical representation of his inner self, and I think you've done ...

Wow, I absolutely loved this story! You have amazing comedic timing, and the unreliable narrator really adds an extra layer of humor to it. The grandiose, pretentious manner of speaking, ...

Hi! This is a really cool poem, and the message is very relatable. I love the sustained fire imagery throughout, and I think the idea of being "prescribed a burn" ...

This is such a bittersweet and emotional short story! I really enjoyed your choice to use a second-person narrative— it's such a unique and eye-catching style choice that drew me ...

Wow, this is absolutely gorgeous! All of the formatting choices elevate this piece from what could've been a very simple poem to a much more intricate and intentional one. Choosing ...

Hi! I really like the concept of this poem, and I definitely agree with a lot of the message of it. Plenty of sonnets do come across as overly flowery ...

Hi! I saw your poem in the green room and the description intrigued me- I too have a habit of writing poetry when I'm supposed to be in class/doing work! ...

Hi! Your description about being "reverse Anakin" really drew me in, mostly because I'm the exact opposite- I hate sand (it's rough and it's coarse and it gets everywhere). I've ...

Hi! I really like this poem, and I think the concept of clouds "going" somewhere works really well and contributes to the sort of wistful, melancholy tone throughout the poem! ...

Hello VioletFantasy! I really like the concept of this poem, so I'm excited to be able to give some feedback! I think that your personification of the emotions works very ...

Hello goldenbird! I love the premise and story of this poem! I thought it was very compelling how you equated mental freedom with a physical place, and I enjoyed the ...