annemyrtle

I am so moved with this. Your poem is short and yet it is so meaningful. It describes exactly how a person could feel after losing that someone that they ...

This is cool since you got me thinking of what you are until I reached the end and knew that your are nothing. At first I assumed that it is ...

I loved that this poem is short and yet it made sense. True that Love should start with friendship. Friendship is an important foundation in love, because if all else ...

This poem is so short yet it is so meaningful. It describes exactly what it is like to be a girl- fragile, but when held gently and when taken good ...

Hi! Just like the comment below, I first thought that you were describing a lover or a girl-friend, but then when I reached the bottom, it was "blood brothers", neither ...

This is good, I liked it! I didn't see the ending coming though. Anyway, I have one suggestion: in this part "She grabbed some Cheerios from the pantry and poured ...