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Re: .
Awwww I love this!!!! Obviously you're dealing with some very heavy topics, but I think you handle them well. I find myself in anxious anticipation to know what occurred between ...
Nov 20, 2017 -
Re: Alone in the Woods
Hey hey!! I'm so glad to read something about nature! It made me happy (oh, and the double spacing made my eyes happy). I love that this is a very ...
Nov 17, 2017 -
Re: Better Without You
I really, really relate to this. Quick story, my ex boyfriend left me (he had to, but he left all the same) after not really being who I needed him ...
Nov 17, 2017 -
Re: Pandora's Box
Alrighty, so first off, I ADORE Greek mythology!! I'm so glad you wrote such a lovely poem about a classic myth. I like how the poem flows- the rhythm created ...
Nov 17, 2017 -
Re: Chaos, Inevitability and Evolution
Okay, this is kind of starting off with a tangent, but I'm big into guided meditations and this reminds me of one (that's a good thing!). I love the lens ...
Nov 15, 2017 -
Re: Sailing The Sea
I think you have some really good ideas to work with here. The imagery and diction is beautiful- it really captures the sea! I would challenge you to think of ...
Nov 15, 2017 -
Re: Oh How The Kill Will Be Sweet
This story is so very sad. I know that's super obvious, but wow. Telling this story from a cat's perspective makes it almost more impactful. I really like the integration ...
Nov 15, 2017
