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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: .

    Awwww I love this!!!! Obviously you're dealing with some very heavy topics, but I think you handle them well. I find myself in anxious anticipation to know what occurred between ...

    Nov 21, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alone in the Woods

    Hey hey!! I'm so glad to read something about nature! It made me happy (oh, and the double spacing made my eyes happy). I love that this is a very ...

    Nov 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Better Without You

    I really, really relate to this. Quick story, my ex boyfriend left me (he had to, but he left all the same) after not really being who I needed him ...

    Nov 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Literature, Culture Re: Pandora's Box

    Alrighty, so first off, I ADORE Greek mythology!! I'm so glad you wrote such a lovely poem about a classic myth. I like how the poem flows- the rhythm created ...

    Nov 18, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Chaos, Inevitability and Evolution

    Okay, this is kind of starting off with a tangent, but I'm big into guided meditations and this reminds me of one (that's a good thing!). I love the lens ...

    Nov 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Sailing The Sea

    I think you have some really good ideas to work with here. The imagery and diction is beautiful- it really captures the sea! I would challenge you to think of ...

    Nov 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Oh How The Kill Will Be Sweet

    This story is so very sad. I know that's super obvious, but wow. Telling this story from a cat's perspective makes it almost more impactful. I really like the integration ...

    Nov 16, 2017


I'll admit the two turtle doves are growing on me, but there are ten birds in this house already and we both know geese are feathered bioweapons of mass destruction.
— Silvern