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Thanks for all the really helpful reviews :) I've edited and tried to take in all of the advice. I've made the rythm more consistent (although it's not exactly consistent-just ...

This is so beautiful! I loved the rhyme scheme and the old fachioned language and the unusual vocabulary you use is just stunning... I am officially a fan XD

Thanks for the reviews and, yeah, it was meant to be "on" :). I've changed that now.

Thanks for the positive feedback and corrections, really appreciated! :)

Loved it! This was so funny and the ending was just adorable :) Amazing!

Thanks for the reviews... I hope she's learnt the lesson too ;) Interesting ideas HarryPotter Rocks, I'll definitely make it less gender specific and I did like the idea of ...

Thanks for the reviews... I hope she's learnt the lesson too ;) Interesting ideas HarryPotter Rocks, I'll definitely make it less gender specific and I did like the idea of ...

Thanks Murtuza and Thersites! I know those lines are a bit awkward, I really liked them though and wasn't quite sure how could shorten them to fit with the rythm... ...

Thanks so much for all the interesting reviews and advice, particularly Lydia your idea about spreading out the minutes in different chapter. I will definitely consider this. Thanks everyone XD

Thanks for the lovely reviews :) and the 'an' was a typo.

I know this story is from a while ago but it totally reminded me of my little sister! Lol, really great and kind of nostalgic... Loved it :)

Thanks for the reviews guys :) I was worried people wouldn't really get the metaphor so I'm relieved Molly got that it was about mental stability. I'm definitely going to ...

This is lovely, it's so simple but I wouldn't change a thing. It's got an almost innocent feel to it, like it's from a childs perspective. Really great job :)

Thanks so much for the reviews :). I totally got where MrSherrington was coming from about having more puntuation to make it easier to read when I read it back ...