anime-girl13

This is really good! I really liked it! :D The only thing is that it didn't really seem like a poem. It didn't have the flow of one. It was ...

I am nothing and this my friend, this is a tale of how I found myself again… A tale of pain and misery… This should read: I am nothing and ...

Wow... I just... wow... this was great! Loved it! :D I couldn't find anything wrong with it >.< I love how you rhymed it. Most people don't (myself included) It ...

This is a really good poem, like always. You've gotten the lines at similar lengths, except for the (I think you know which one) 5th line. Also, the second to ...

Once again, make sure you capitalize the beginning of each line. I also noticed that this poem is somewhat similar to your other poem, Fake Everything. Another thing is that ...

This is a really good, straightforward poem. Sometimes repetition of words is bad, but, in this case, it is good and really brings the point out. One thing I noticed ...

This is really good and your choice of words are excellent, but, I must add, with the really long lines, it looks awkward and clumsy. I recommend turning those long ...

I agree with Lena. I was going to read your story, but, with one look at it, I immediately lost the interest to review it. All it looked like to ...

Ah, love these books! :D But most people don't even know anything about the plot of the series. You should write it longer and with more details and background information ...

Really great poem! I loved it! :D One thing I noticed is that you started lines uppercase and some lowercase. It looks like you meant to do that so don't ...

This is really good, and you use some great vocabulary words in there. They make it more... poetic... but it also sometimes confuses the reader. Another thing I noticed is ...

“We, the Council, we are here to train you. I'm not sure, but shouldn't you get rid of the second 'we'? It seems a little repetitive to me and awkward. ...

This is really good! I don't think that poems really need a pattern. Poems are a way to get out your scrambled feelings and/or thoughts, so no pattern is needed. ...

Wow... this was really good! Morbid, but, since i like things like that, really good! I didn't find any mistakes that hadn't already been found. Keep up the good work! ...