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Re: The Rarities (Prologue)
Okay, okay, okay! This review is kinda late, but maybe that’s a good thing because now you’ve had some time for ideas to brew. There’s still so much to decide ...
Mar 22, 2025 -
Re: The Damages of American Schools
Ah, the American education system. Good enough to slip through abuse standards, but not good enough for one person to completely tolerate it. American high schooler here, so my opinion ...
Mar 22, 2025 -
Re: What if I were a boy?
Oh wow! This is a very well worded perspective that touches on many familiar concepts. Things that are expected as the bare minimum in girls are highly praised anomalies in ...
Feb 18, 2025 -
Re: Why do we believe in people?
Okay, there is a lot to unpack here. First, I see the purpose and intent in each of these sentences. Moms are a person with a lot of influence on ...
Jan 5, 2025 -
Re: All To Herself
I truly loved the message of this poem. The story starts off sweet and naïve, but then it stumbles into the conflict that is life. The question “why?” was asked ...
Dec 28, 2024 -
Re: ctrl + a
This is a very cool structure and it fits the title perfectly. The subject you chose to write about is very fitting for this platform as well, since mostly all ...
Dec 28, 2024 -
Re: Our Story
Wow, this was a long story, but I feel as if I've known the narrator my whole life. Starting with the first chapter, I loved the imagery for the first ...
Dec 21, 2024 -
Re: Boxes Lie
I'm not much of a poem reader, or analyzer. However, I believe your work is special. The background helps connect the reader to the current season, creating a reason for ...
Dec 21, 2024 -
Re: Death And A Scraped Knee.
I loved reading your work, here's what resonated with me: "When I was only seven years old, I placed a Pokémon card on his chest and sat back down" It ...
Dec 21, 2024
