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Hello DeliriumNervosa, Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. You'll definitely see more of my work. :)

Hello Haraya, Thanks for the review. I do agree the setting is unclear. As the writer, it was easy for me to think that it is clear when in fact ...

Wow, nice poem.

Most definitely you can. Don't ask me though how, because I don't know. Right now though I'm in the process of learning music theory, I hope that knowledge will be ...

Thank you Vento, I haven't ever written a sonnet before but I will read more on them then tune this poem to be one. Thank you once more. Have a ...

Thank you @IIUMBRELLAZ. I'm really glad you found this poem to be a good read. Have a good day/night! :-)

Now that you have pointed out how the use of the word "sealed" interrupts the flow a little, I can't "unnotice it":-). I'll think of a word which can replace ...

Thank you @brookeallo. Punctuation clearly isn't my strongest forte. Thank you for pointing out the errors. I'm editing the poem to fix them. Have a good day/night! :-)

Thanks for the review @Knight731! I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem. I will definitely keep on writing. :)

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review @LZPianoGirl! I'm glad you loved the poem. I will work on punctuation in my future poems. Have a good Tuesday!

Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you loved this poem. I will definitely work on what @Avgrant pointed out. Have a good day or night too!

Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you loved this poem. I will definitely work on what @Avgrant pointed out. Have a good day or night too!

Thanks for the review!

I love this poem. Period. You have done much in four lines than most poets do with several stanzas. The promises the persona has to break due to the (un)timely ...