anabelsinclair

So! Much! Action! The fight scenes were tense, taut, filled with descriptive imagery, and well executed! You had a good balance of character interaction to movement, and there was little ...

Hi there! Here to read and review. The tone of this poem is definitely melancholy, and sets for a somber mood. It read like a stream of thought, which is ...

Hello! Here to read and review. 1. One of the plus[es] about this piece is the narrative POV. I don't think this story could be sold from any other perspective ...

Hallo! Here to read and review: I liked the pace and structure of this work; the way you described the scenes and settings without making a production of it. You ...

Gosh, this is so poignant... Okay, you asked for punctuation help. *Cracks knuckles* I shall do my best: I used to sit on the roof during the sunset every night, ...

Nicely done! I appreciate the structure and diction used in this poem - how you use words like 'on the dot', 'exactly' and 'dare be late' to emphasize the rigidity ...

Hello! I enjoyed this, the mundane and slightly put upon of the narrator. I like how he or she s not really quite as concerned about the kiss, as they ...

Hello! What a read! I can only imagine what a trip it must have been to write. I like Tobias and I like Phihana; your honesty in etching out their ...

Whoa, This was a trip from beginning to end! I don't know why, but I kept on picturing this scene enacted by the Incredibles, with your protagonist as Violet. Too ...

Hello! Here to read and review. This is clearly one piece out of an ongoing work that I haven't read more of, so take my two cents about this piece ...

Oh wow, This was an intense work to read, I can only imagine how it must've been to write. The scene was well described and the human emotions, well portrayed. ...

This is fascinating, quite an interesting foray into life behind the barrack walls. I admire and respect your use of this medium, chiefly because you are painting an entire picture ...

Oh my, What a chilling, and utterly riveting story! I honestly was sucked in from the very first word; your characters are well defined and I love how you use ...

Hello! I liked this, the dry tone of the poem. I like the sparseness of details, it really underscores the message 'let's be sheep'. No need to think too much. ...

Hello! I'm here to read and review. It's easy to feel bad for James, and root for him for trying to pull through Christmas. It is refreshing to read about ...