amberlemayy

Hello! I really enjoy your poem! The message that is conveyed is absolutely beautiful, and I could not agree more with what you are trying to say through the words. ...

Hello there! I really, really like story line you have here! I enjoy how personal it feels to read this. I think you do a really good job at allowing ...

Hi there! I really enjoy how you made this poem flow! Though there are just a few places where it doesn't flow quite as well, I was very impressed and ...

Hi, Erebus! I would like to start off by saying I think your poem was lovely! I am a big fan of both the writing of it, and reading it. ...

Hello there! I think this is a pretty interesting story! As it progresses, I think you could do some pretty cool stuff with it. I like how you portray the ...

Hi there! I really like the words you use in this poem. I also really like how you turned it into a story. In some places the words flow together ...

Hello there, zsmith! First of all, I would like to let you know how much I love where this story is going! I read chapter one so that I would ...

Hello there!! First of all, I would like to say that I think this will be a wonderful story! The way you write makes me want to know more about ...

Hi, there! I would like to start off by saying that I think this chapter is excellently worded. You used a very nice variety of vocabulary, which I appreciated. The ...