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Re: The Soft Leaves and Sharp Thorns
Hello! I really enjoy your poem! The message that is conveyed is absolutely beautiful, and I could not agree more with what you are trying to say through the words. ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: A Reason to Run
Hello there! I really, really like story line you have here! I enjoy how personal it feels to read this. I think you do a really good job at allowing ...
Mar 25, 2016 - Re: For Lareine Feb 10, 2016
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Re: Honey, I Can't Pay the Rent
Hi there! I really enjoy how you made this poem flow! Though there are just a few places where it doesn't flow quite as well, I was very impressed and ...
Feb 10, 2016 -
Re: The Blimp
Hi, Erebus! I would like to start off by saying I think your poem was lovely! I am a big fan of both the writing of it, and reading it. ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Goodbye, Pumpkin.
Hello there! I think this is a pretty interesting story! As it progresses, I think you could do some pretty cool stuff with it. I like how you portray the ...
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: Queen Of Nothing (no 1 of The Forgotten Soul series)
Hi there! I really like the words you use in this poem. I also really like how you turned it into a story. In some places the words flow together ...
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: The Void - Chapter 2
Hello there, zsmith! First of all, I would like to let you know how much I love where this story is going! I read chapter one so that I would ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: The Snow Queen (Part I)
Hello there!! First of all, I would like to say that I think this will be a wonderful story! The way you write makes me want to know more about ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: Subaquatic - Chapter 1
Hi, there! I would like to start off by saying that I think this chapter is excellently worded. You used a very nice variety of vocabulary, which I appreciated. The ...
Jan 23, 2016