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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Strangers

    Hello there musicandme! I saw you posted this poem & wanted to check it out. & I must say, I really enjoyed this! This concept of strangers is something I ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Over the Horizon ~ Chapter 1

    Hello there Nikki399! Ambeezy here for a review. So, I read that you haven't edited this piece yet, so I won't point out grammar & all that stuff. First off ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Chapter 3, Part 1)

    Heyyyyy ^__^ I'm back again! I am slowly but surely catching up with your story! Unless you post another part & I'll get behind again... >.< Okay getting off subject. ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Chapter 2, Part 2)

    Helluuuuuuur BookWolf! Ambeezy here for yet another review! Sooo, lets get started. First off, I think I like Maven now more than I did the last chapter. She has such ...

    Nov 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Chapter 2, Part 1) ((Corrected))

    Helllloooo BookWolf! Ahhhh I'm so behind with your story! *Grrrrrrr. Forgive me! College is sucking the life out of me! ugggh. Well, lets not waste anytime shall we? On to ...

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Part 2 of Chapter 1) ((Corrected Again))

    Hello there BookWolf! (cool username btw) Ambeezy here for a review! (: Okay so some nitpicks! She had easily recognized her brother when his face had appeared through her cell ...

    Oct 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Part 1 of Chapter 1) ((Corrected))

    Hello! ambeezy here for a review, obviously. Okay, so I thought your introduction was awesome. You have very good imagery, and it made me want to keep reading. I like ...

    Oct 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter Two

    Hello again! Beezy here to review chapter 2 as promised. Marcus headed home that night in a foul mood. Yay we get to read Marcus's point of view! For this ...

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter One

    Hello Certainly Love! Not sure if you remember me or anything, but you donated points to me awhile back for my story "My Fair Gypsy". Anyways, I wanted to return ...

    Oct 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: To Love a Killer

    I totally loved this! *chills*. First, your beginning was very engaging. You put the right amount of mystery for the readers to want to read more. Also, I like how ...

    Oct 20, 2014


I cannot separate the aesthetic pleasure of seeing a butterfly and the scientific pleasure of knowing what it is.
— Vladmir Nabokov