amandajo

Thanks for the input. I was just testing out a story idea and was wondering what you guys thought. I can tell I have a lot of work to do. ...

I enjoyed the dominant role the kitten played. But I would love to know what makes the dog listen to the kitten. It was a good story. I saw a ...

Thanks for your suggestions. And it's my second poem. The first didn't go so well. I'm glad you liked it and I will take them into consideration.

i dont know what to say. well all i will say is that it confused me. i dont really get what your really saying.

it was interesting. i like how you put enough but not too much emotion into it. tell me when you've finished. :)

i liked your metaphor, how you compare passion with a burn. but to tell you the truth it felt kind of awkward when i read it. overall it was a ...

i liked the flow of it but i do think that you should put more emotion into it. i couldnt exactly feel what you were thinking.

thanks that did help a little i can see what you mean. i didnt actually specify. i was trying to say that there are so many things to be controlled ...

i liked it. i'm actually writing a story like it. i'm not going to bore you with the details but your story was entertaining. hope you keep on writing. -amanda

i liked it but i'm new so i guess it doesnt really count :) -amanda