alwaysbeininspired95

i LOVE this. There are some grammatical errors, and places where the wording could be re-arranged, but i think all the people that commented before me covered that. You're fantastic, ...

HOLY MOLY. this is INcredible. I loved it, and had an extremely clear picture in my mind all the way through. The only thing that confused me at first was ...

I REALLY like this poem, especially because I can relate to it so well, and I feel like a lot of people will be able to. There were some parts ...

This is seriously incredible. You're SO talented. The only thing i was confused about was one of the first lines: "the liquid-like moon is artificial enough to splash through the ...

I LOVE this!! You could write children's books easily. I really enjoyed it and cracked up almost the whole time. I like the 'not too runny' because at first it ...

That was amazing. I am being completely serious about this: you should publish that. You are such a good writer! And this story is fantastic. It is interesting, keeps the ...

I think this has a lot of potential. If you added a couple more stanzas, went a little deeper into detail of what you're going through maybe, it would be ...

I am so excited to see where this is going to go! There are a few typos here and there but otherwise it was fantastic! It was really cute and ...

I don't know about this. I mean, it was very good, it just didn't pull me in right at the beginning. I don't know what I'm saying it was extremely ...

This is amazing! You are extremely talented! It caught my attention first by the title, then by how you wrote in second person, and then by your story line. It ...

This made me laugh so hard!!! It's truly great, I could never write something like this. It almost reminded me of something Dr. Seuss would write. It wasn't serious at ...

I really like this poem. Throughout reading it, though, I wanted it to keep going, I wanted it to have more description. I think it ended too soon. Maybe a ...

i like the way you described mikey. I received a very clear picture of her. I wish you would have described the man falling in love with her more though. ...

this song is really touching and beautiful. The only thing i wish you would have done is had a good ending to it. I hate it when there's this really ...

I don't know much about this story because i didn't read the first two chapters but if i could change just one thing I would put way more description in ...