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Hi Awaken. Sorry about pressing the back button! “In case you haven’t noticed Blaze, this is the life of a foster child. So stop acting otherwise! This is nitpickiness but ...

Hi tmne22. Sorry it took me so long to review this. It wasn’t a hard run by any means but it helps to clear the head. This sentence is okay ...

Hi. I'm not really good at reviewing poems but I saw this one yesterday and wanted to review it. Memories are the clouds I tried to hold on to As ...

Hi Dreamer, here to review your last chapter of the moment. I haven't really gone in order. Later that night me and dad ate the left over pizza from last ...

Hi Dreamer. Here to review your other chapters; I reviewed Chapter 4 this morning. :) Right off the bat, I notice grammar errors: b] "I won't be here when you ...

Hi Dreamer. I read the PM saying that you posted this chapter so I figured I may as well go ahead and review it. :) I'll read your other chapters ...

Hi Jasmine. And you-you just need to stop. Just stop” Period after the second Stop. That his hands pulled me tight to his body, and yet it was not tight ...

Hi Dreamer. Here to review; I'm going in no order, really, so I may not get to chapter 2 til tomorrow. Basically, my main problem with this chapter was grammar. ...

Hi mizz-iceberg. Someone gave this link while chat was up earlier and I thought I'd take a look at it. I twist and turn in bed, trying to get comfortable. ...

Hi Jasmine, here as promised. A small part of me wanted to shut my eyes, run past the doors up to my room and pull the covers over my head. ...

Battle of the Books? I am so envious! I was on my school's non-traveling team in 6th grade but couldn't keep up in 7th and 8th grade so I had ...

Hi Olivia. I got this done a few days ago between homeroom and first period (mainly first period) but I forgot about it. *Apologizes* She didn’t want to be pushing ...

Hi tnmes22. I know you're probably not going to make any changes but I thought I'd review it anyway and because it's so short, it may be harsh. Grammatically, I ...

Hi Jasmine. Here as promised. Sorry it's taken me so long--I'm banning people in Randomness. :) “Hello, my name is Willow.” Well, that’s what they said her name is. Willow ...

Hi Olivia. All I can say is that I liked how you switched characters in it. Try separting the times you switch whose talking though, by something other than paragraphs. ...