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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Sunshine

    glad you like it! :D

    Jul 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Sunshine

    Thanks for your review! And yes you got the part of the last stanza right :D Have a great day/night!

    Jul 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Sunshine

    A special mention and thanks to @GengarIsBestBoy for recommending this piece of music!

    Jul 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: This Feeling So New

    Thanks for the review! Glad you like it :D

    Jul 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: I craved for a disaster

    Thank you for the review! This helps a lot :D Glad that you like the poem, too! Have a great day/night!

    Jul 25, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Gifted

    Thanks for your review! I like how you provided a new perspective to this poem. Turns out many people can relate to this, not only "gifted" kids. And for that ...

    Jul 25, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative Re: Reflecting Hearts - Prologue

    Glad I was spot on! You're welcome :D I could see this was a carefully woven work so great job on that, too! It is a novel noh? I would ...

    Jul 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: I craved for a disaster

    Thanks for your review as always, Kaia! Glad you like the poem! Yes, I have to admit that I was literally rambling with my P.S. HAHAHAH But making a character ...

    Jul 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gymnopedie #3

    Thanks for your review! Actually I was thinking of using the word "brain" instead of mind. But I personally found the repetition of the word "mind" to be more intense, ...

    Jul 22, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gymnopedie #3

    Yup! Exactly hahaha

    Jul 21, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: This Feeling So New

    Thanks for your review! Glad you like it :D

    Jul 21, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gymnopedie #3

    Thanks for the review and also for the suggestions on how to improve. It helps a lot :D Have a great day/night

    Jul 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gymnopedie #3

    Thanks! I recommend you listen to Gymnopedie 3 while reading this. It greatly helps with visualizing it. Or you can listen to it your spare time. It is an interesting ...

    Jul 20, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Gifted

    thanks for your review!

    Jul 17, 2023
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: 123

    glad you like it!

    Jul 17, 2023


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