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  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other Re: Molly Davidson, you shattered soul

    Ohh cool! Thanks!! :D

    Jun 22, 2023
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other Re: Molly Davidson, you shattered soul

    Okay, this was definitely creepy. And I believe that's the kind of vibe you're going for here. It's my first time to review your works, because I can be quite ...

    Jun 22, 2023
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: 123

    Thank you for the review! 1. Ah yes overwhelment is not a word, my bad HAHAHAH 2. I wanted to focus more on the characters first. I will make sure ...

    Jun 19, 2023
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: 123

    Thank you so much for the review! That's actually a good idea, italicizing several parts. As for the rating, I made it 16 just in case I decided to go ...

    Jun 19, 2023
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: 123

    Thank you! I hope you liked it :)

    Jun 19, 2023
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: 123

    Whether I will continue this story or not depends on how good the idea is. If you have any suggestions, comments, ideas, violent reactions and the like, I'll be willing ...

    Jun 19, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: The Unworthy Hero

    Thank you so much for your review! Really appreciate it To answer your questions, Lucy is the adopted daughter of Dempsey as mentioned in the short story (the daughter part ...

    Jun 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: I looked like her

    Thank you so much for your review and encouragement! I really appreciate it :D I'm happy to know that my writing is improving at least in drawing people in the ...

    Jun 18, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: This White Tornado

    Thanks! It was a pleasure reading yours :D

    Jun 18, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Delusional Love Colors

    It was a delight to read! Keep on writing, you got quite a talent for writing :D

    Jun 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: A Ticking Bomb

    Thank you for your review! The poem actually revolves around technology, the internet, and the like. But comparing it to the world is also a nice perspective, so thanks for ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Two-faced

    Thank you for your review and encouragement! I'm glad you liked it :) I'm happy with the reception of everyone to this poem even though it's rough on the edges ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Reverie

    Thanks for your review, comments and encouragement! Yes I highly recommend you listen to Reverie. It's a classical piece by Debussy and it honestly helps me in visualizing and imagining ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: I looked like her

    Thanks for the review! Actually, I wrote this poem in the context of the second interpretation, but the first interpretation works really well too :) Glad you enjoyed it!

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: I looked like her

    Thank you for your review! Cannot wait to see your writings on suspense and mystery. And do not worry I am okay hehe :D Thanks for the encouragement too! Have ...

    Jun 16, 2023


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