alohajuice

This would be a really awesome piece of SLAM poetry. you just need to perform it with the right swagger and confidence. This had a really fresh idea and I ...

Ummm. This was very messy. I had two problems with reading this: the couplet rhyming and the disintegration of the couplet rhyming. First off, your rhymes did not seem genuine. ...

I love collabs. This one was interesting. Sadly I couldn't get to see the photo that inspired you, because the link led straight to a JOIN NOW page. It reminded ...

If I must die, then let me die Soaring upward toward the sky; And at the zenith of my flight, Cross from darkness into light. If I must go, then ...

Men. Men men men. What a filthy taste on your pristine lips. I love these first three lines. Your eyes look so cold, A warmth is hidden. But I see ...

I walk past the park where children laugh And take my leave from the city street, my face and hands buried in my coat. this sounds awkward. On these cold ...

It’s the silence that you pull around you while you check your emails, the silence that makes a goldfish bowl around you while you sit and knit. this doesn't make ...

Laugh at me if you want to Hide from me if you can hehe Let me sink into you Like quick sand Chase me if you believe Stay here if ...

This is a twist on a haiku. Enjoy:) Down on the banks where the Old Oak tree grows strongly There was a little girl who Sat there quietly Waiting for ...

Three pigs, a girl and a sign. Yes I have learned to rhyme. While fat ladies sing, There's a square boxing ring. A fully sung hero. And upper class zero. ...

This is a poem i wrote for English, but i thought that i'd post it. I'm not sure what type of poem it is. It might be free verse, i ...

When I peel back your skin, I'd better not see your heart whimper with complacency. I need somebody with an electrical socket embedded in their skull, and whose dreams are ...

There’s something about weather , whether it changes your mood or not. The wind blows trees from here to there , their leaves being to rot. I pull out the ...

I’ve been broken I’ve been beaten I’ve been left bruised and bleeding this pain is yet another hurt another strife another tear to fall I’ve seen dark waters dancing in ...

this was really good. I like the simple title too. The first stanza was my favorite part, it showed your sincere feeling for this guy and a characteristic about him. ...