aliceceleste

This was really beautifully written and sad, so I congratulate you. This was very touching, with a good theme behind the story. You have written with good technical accuracy as ...

Hey, I really enjoyed reading this; I haven't read anything similar before, and I think you expressed it well. I like the way you talk about the word 'soon' and ...

This is a very intriguing and interesting piece of writing, so I will review for you ;) I like the different twist to it, but I think you could make ...

Hey there, I will try to review this for you :-) I really like the way you built up tension near the end, which catches the readers attention, and the ...

Hey there! First of all, I really like the idea of your piece of writing, so I will try to review it for you! I think you told the story ...

Hi, I will review this for you, as so far no one else has. I will start by saying I really like the idea behind this piece of writing, and ...

Hi there! I'm going to attempt to review this lovely piece of work :) I really liked reading this because it kept me hooked from start to finish, and there ...

Hi, I thought you did a brilliant job with this, well done! Your characters were really interesting to read about because of the way you write about his inner feelings ...

Hi, aliceceleste here with a review for you :) I really enjoyed reading this as it was quite interesting. Funnily enough, you have used the same names for your characters ...

When I first looked at this, I was debating whether to read it because of the length of it. I am so glad I did read it! This was absolutely ...

Happy Review Day! Here I am reviewing this fantastic piece of writing :) I loved reading this so much, it felt like I was reading something really intimate and heartfelt- ...

This was a really unique and brilliant piece of writing, lovely! I really like your style of writing, it kept me hooked and wanting to read more the whole way ...

Lovely piece of writing you have here, thank you! First of all, I will give you some constructive criticism; -I think some more background information and detail would have been ...

Beautiful poem! I don't usually like poems, in general, so that really is a compliment! I really liked the message behind the poem, which the reader is able to grasp ...

What can I say? WOW! This was absolutely heart wrenching, it really drew me in and made me keep on reading all the way to the end, so congratulations on ...