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Thanks. :) Your reviews have been extremely helpful. Honesty is much more helpful than sugarcoated reviews, so thank you! The tips about the dialogue are really good! I really love ...

Thanks for the review! This chapter is a pretty heavy one, both in action and in information, but I hope that I can work out some of the bland spots

Well, the purple banner thing was something that they both would know about, so that was a piece of information that couldn't really work its way into the dialogue, so ...

Yep, the mention of clique is quite intentional! Throughout the novel, I was trying to create an atypical world (not to an extreme, but more for the intrigue) And yeah, ...

Ha, fray is a noun meaning battle or struggle but that's ok! I'm glad people are checking up on the vocab in the poem. Thanks for the comments on both ...

Ha, I actually agree with the rhyming thing, but I wrote it as a Petrachan sonnet, which has the rhyme scheme of abbaabba for the first stanza and a different ...

Thanks for the review! I mainly write poetry as I am inspired to do so, and this was just one of those pieces that popped into my brain. I will ...

Thanks for the review! (1-2) Yeah, I realize the paragraphing work isn't the best. I need to go back and work on that. I did rush this scene, but it ...

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Hey, AJ here! I saw your chapter title and was immediately interested! (And you also reviewed my chapter) First, some technical stuff. - The wording seems a little odd on ...

That would be fab! :)

Thanks for the review! Unfortunately, I think this story line just has to play out for several chapters before it makes sense... Of course then, that could just be me ...

Thank you so much for your review! (And I do use a program similar to Word, but for some unknown reason, my spellcheck is completely non-functional. Go figure...) I have ...

Hey! Thanks so much for that review! Unfortunately, I'm afraid that you probably weren't thinking along the same wavelength as this poem. It's not intended to be original, but instead ...

Thanks for reading! The poem is semi-inspired by a heart-broken reader and partially by an understanding writer. I love it though, to be honest. -AJ

Thanks for stopping by! I struggle with liking math, but it has slowly improved. I definitely feel for both sides of the matter. :) -AJ