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I love your writing style, it's very unique. There isn't much to critique here, but I can't wait to read more. Nice work!

Hello Izzyeyore! Well, I have to say, I'm a sucker for any love story. This was a phenomenal piece beyond it's few words. I enjoyed the showing rather then telling ...

This was very wonderfully written! I didn't know what to expect when I read the title but I enjoyed it a lot! (:

I wasn't purposely bumping my post, it's been here since December! I didn't know if it was terrible or no one saw it, sorry!

No crits? =[

Yes, same! I am hooked, when you write more PM me!

Hello rhie! I have to say, when I usually see a story this long and not spaced out, I hit the back button. This story kept me very interested and ...

Hello Tres*Chic, Wow, very nice piece ! I don't have time to go over grammar but I definitely enjoyed reading it. I'm excited to know what happens next so hurry ...

The house has upset my expectations. It seemed almost…cozy. The last detention center I was residing in was on the contrary. The leaky roof and lovely pit-bulls were its only ...

I'll definitely add more. I'm getting some ideas now! =] If anyone else has any ideas, help me out!

This was a great piece of work! Usually when I see something that long, I tend to run and hide, but I just kept reading! Just add some more details, ...

This is the second part, I'll add more soon. =] Crescent View High school was the most segregate school on the planet; racially and socially. I didn’t understand why people ...

I edited the first part and I'm going to post the second part after this. Enjoy ! :D The impact of his hand across my face sent me to the ...

This is a very good piece! I think you should at A LOT more detail because it is very short because I like the concept :] Haha, and even thought ...

Thank guys! I'll be updating soon. :]