aestar101

Awesome song. Great depth

"Story/poem mixes" as you call them is narrative poetry. I love this poem. It touches me in a way that you don't know. My life used to be like that ...

I like everything except the last two lines. They sounded to corny and cliche. Everything else blown me away. Good Job.

AMEN, BROTHER. Send this to the White House. Lord knows they need this poem. It is a great projection of the perpetual decline of America!!!!!

Your poem is like someones hair: long and flowing. This is one of my hands down favorites. I love the depth and imagry.

I don't get this and yet I do. The frist stanza was the haredest to understand. For me it was endearing and a puzzle to figure out. I liked it ...

I don't get it.

That was beautiful. It touched me. You're making me cry. :cry:. I need a moment.

This was great! I could realy see this published.

I loved it!!! You could expand more because you have really good thoughts comming though. We need to see more of them.

I just loved the words. All the poems I read here somehow touch my heart. It just jumps out at me. Not much rythmn, but the feeling is there.

YEAH, BREAK DOWN THE WALLS OF CONVENTION WITH INDIVIDUALISM!!!!!!

Leja, can you tranlate this for me. I really want to read it.

Translation please.

One word: Beautiful