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I loved this. I could see you projecting hope than complete anguish. I say don't change anything. This was a good peice of literature. I loved the depth. Hope this ...

I'll be intersted to get a PM when the next installment comes out. :D

You can probaly ask Nate to delete this. Don't be ashamed. Its the writng process every author has a work of writng that they thought sucked. You can revise it ...

I made it shorter. I killed the stuff I didn't need: Running down the streets, Like there’s no tomorrow, As I tiptoe though the brick sidewalks, I swing around each ...

I liked it. It was very romantic :) !

Thanks for the crits! God, I don't reccomend the cursing because the mods don't like that. :D

Love this peice. Awesome content. Even better imagry and abstract thought with a tad of romance. This one's a keeper.

I liked it. It was good. The imagry was excellent.

I agree with the others. This is not poerty its just random specutlions. I actually hate it it was bland, it had no depth it was just there.

The "good guy" of cliches. I liked it. Your twits on cliches. It was good, I like it. Thats all I can say.

That was good. Don't lie, Stella. You are a poet. :)

I can relate too. I liked teh rythmn and the imagry in the frist satnza.

Love it! It has so much depth. I was imaging a rose when I was reading this. Great!

I like the edgynees and the sarcasticness to it. Its a good poem.

That was passonate. I loved it. Nothing wrong, I think.