aestar101

That was good. but I'm wondering if this should be in a fiction catagory insted of poetry. But that was good. :D :D . Keep writing.

That was lovely, awesome, spetactular....... I'm such a sucker for romance!!! Lover the rythmn and th imagery. That just... WOW... blew me away. Keep writing :D :D :D :D

This was funny. Sweet... sweet, revenge!!!! :D :D :D

Reading your poems is like I'm put in a romance novel (not a sappy one). It almost like a religous experience. You have serious talent. Keep on writing. Again seperate ...

Welcome to the YWS!!! Before you hear this from anyone else you might as well hear it from me. We recommend that there is a 2:1 review to literary additons ...

This was great! The plot is somthing to figure out!!! Keep on going. :) :)

You got me addicited to this story. Keep on writing. I'm listing to Finally by Fergie and it matches Alicia feelings after the kiss. I somewhat agree with Fall_Into_The _Sky's ...

Welcome to the YWS!!!!!!! This poem has a ton of potential, just put in more details and this could be an awesome poem. I love romantic stuff. How did he ...

Welcome to the YWS!!!!!! There is passion and fire in this poem. It innocenlty uninnocent. I like this poem. You might want to space everything out into stanzas. Overall this ...

This poem had a stream of wonder running though me. I loved it. There was beautiful emotion in it that brought me back to last year when I swore I ...

That brought out the blood sweat and tears that comes with writing. I can see that you are channeling some angst :D :D. Nice Job.

This a a third grade feel to it. It rhymy, repetative, and sing songy. I think it's good. It's more of a poem to teach little kids to be themselves. ...

It good but space out your thoughts into stanzas. It looks more organized :D :D :D :D

Joe was fat, stupid, ugly and all around obnoxious. His 'friends' hated him, his teacher hated him and even his parents hated him! Bad case of character bashing. A writer ...

I agree with everyone. This story is cute and good for light reading. The title is similar to another book that's already out its called: All's Fair in Love, War, ...