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I disagree with Incandesance. I think this is a poem. These are not lyrics. It doesn't even read like lyrics, let alone follow the format of lyrics. I love this ...

Hey lex. Welcome to the YWS. Do you know lex means "law" in Latin? What Cade said you have to keep your review writing ration 2:1. Now onto the review: ...

I was good,b tu I think you need to expand more. Like the fight bewtween the father and the daughter. the wedding and the reception. I felt like the whole ...

This is the first emo love peom I saw on this site. Emo because it laced with cliched self pity and love because he is dangorusly in love witha girl ...

That was a great start. 1. Skye's personality I think is slightly depressed and agnstful. I argee withte person above that she night wants attention. 2. I like the writng ...

I like this poem, but it feels cliche and overused. Make it your own! It felt like a stream of consiousness for me. It felt like a car rushing by. ...

I read poems because I like peoples' perspectives. I like the depth and imagry in this poem. I can imgane what happens in my brain. One of my favorates. :D ...

I like the imagry and the rythmn. It so romantic!!!! The girl you give this too is the luckiest in the world. More guys should do this. :D Make sure ...

Great poem!!! I like the depth and rythmn. There is nothing else to say about this poem. To me its flawless!!! :) :) :)

This was okay. Its not great. I think you have to make it more interesting by expanding and using different words. Try making more endearing. This is too repeatitive and ...

This poem is different from the other love poems. Its always good to bring somthing different to tha table. I like the depth and the emotion. I can feel the ...

This has alot of depth in this work. I like the imagry and the desription of emotions. This poem is an awesome excuse to fall in love with a musician. ...

What do you have against cites? No offence I didn't really like it. I'm sorry, but this was filled with stereotypes that say the city is a endless death hole ...

This is a good poem. I like the references to the human body and the imagry. There is are dark and sad connotations comming from this poem. I like how ...

That was a short peom with maximum effect. This could hit someone the same way as a long poem. I loved it :D :D. It felt like it was comming ...