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I loved it. I liked you depth of thinking to write this poem. I also like the progression of the events. You didn't put everything in one shot. I also ...

These lyrics move mountians. This is really good. I liked the fact that you choose moving mountain to describe tow people's love. This is better than the crap they put ...

Wow. Deep. I loved this piece. It was a nice balance of beauty and fate. A balance that all romance should have. I felt so attached to your characters. Espeicially ...

It is short and sweet. Good for light reading. I liked the decription of Alan. I smiled as his beautiful green eyes locked on mine. He smiled as a lock ...

I agree with Suzanne. I like your message, but it doesn't seem like poetry. There is nothing really poetic about it. Put in some imagery, smiles, metaphors and other writing ...

I think I'll be the only on in this forum who gets this. She is using titles of popular songs to show how her love life is like. This is ...

I loved this poem. It was sweet, simple, and showed a great example of young love. I think the title was fabulous and the whole idea of wet flowers. I ...

I liked this poem. I loved how you expressed the feelings of being played out. I loved the feeling you put into it. There is nothing else to say. What ...

This was a very powerful poem. Wow , Iccarus. This shows a ton of depth in thought and awareness to the issues of the world with good use of irony. ...

I love this poem. I love how it starts out all sexy then wallows into true love. I like the rhythm and the beat of this poem Highlights: Lightning slashes ...

Welcome to the YWS! :D I personally think that you don't need to expand if you don't want to. It was simply beautiful. I liked how you potrayed the feeling ...

Excellent! This brings up a question that my teacher asked us in class during an introduction to the new work of literature we're reading, "Romeo and Juliet". Because we are ...

First review!!!! :D I liked how you potayed the pain in this peice. I miss the way things once were, the way life use to be. Before the world came ...

Peri, I'm sorry I took so long to crit your peice. Finals, stuff like that, you know. On to the review. Whoa, those kids have quite a vocabulary for ten ...

I liked it. It was a nice start, but I don't get gangstas in space thing. I think it is kinda weird combination, but it kinda works. Will this relationship ...