This was a very powerful poem. Wow , Iccarus. This shows a ton of depth in thought and awareness to the issues of the world with good use of irony. Some Highlights:
People want equality! Peace and love,
so they lynch a white man and they worship a white dove.
The cops run wild, beat up a young man
but he raped a little girl, so it’s alright.
This line caught my attention.
The imagery, it is broken.
The songs are doom and gloom.
Dylan’s voice is all rusty.
The Pope™ is a raccoon.
Ooooo...touchy, touchy. This will get some people angry(Catholics), but I feel its needed.
We abuse African countries,
but give them some food too
and there's a man in the TV,
he’s been shot, stabbed, raped three times
but it’s just for laughs so I don’t mind.
This is what I was saying when I meant irony. It was great and it gets the message across. Amen, brother.
And yes, you're right,
I’ve lost all touch with reality.
Hey, I don’t mind much.
I washed my hands once already,
I don't want them to get dirty yet again.
This was the icing on the cake. It ended this poem with a bang. You should be proud of yourself.
Viva La Revolucion! this is a very angry poem, or at lest, its passionate. and i have to agree, the last stanza is probably the best, youre saying, "If this is real-life, real life can go to hell" , right?
I totally agree with you God.
This poem does not make people look at the truth.
This poem is not straight to the point.
This poem is not sad.
This poem is not true.
This is not a poem.
This work accomplishes nothing.
To write about the truth falsely is worse than to write what is not true
I think this is wrong and whoever wrote it needs to open their eyes and stop viewing the world as just the back and front of their house.
Anyway this is a great poem. Get it published.
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