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adrianne222

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Ideal illusion

    Nice mashing up together a song and a short story. I`m a fan of the *song* you used here but i forgot its title :( I think it`s really cool ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Circle of Family

    I`ve read a Filipino version of this when I was a kid. It`s good to read this again in another language. I think it`s not really that funny but entertaining ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Confidence is key...I guess

    This is very tiring to read :( You should have divided this into at least 3 paragraphs. It looked messy and compressed. Also, your grammar needs some reinforcement. I recommend ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fear

    "Why do we bury our vibrant colors, In fear that others will like the duller?" Best two lines !! This is definitely unforgettable! I have read many other poems which ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Script » Narrative, Literature Re: Homecoming

    Wow! You`re very good at combining words though my limited knowledge of the English language can`t grab most of your deeper-than-adelle sentences. I can`t agree more with Candy Wizard. Superb ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, General Re: Many friends or fewer friends?

    In contrast to your opinion, I choose "many" over "few" friends. You said that the problem with a large circle of friends is that an unwritten rule exists which says ...

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Best Friend

    It`s really good that more and more works are tackling the ever-sensitive topic about homosexuality. Kudos for you since you`re one of the LGBT Pride! Here`s my review of your ...

    Apr 15, 2015


I'm tired of books having villains who are just villains for no reason.
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