Why is it that I am the only one who is always hurt all the time. I feel like a piece of dirt in the ground all the time. Sometimes I jus want to end it all and just hide. Why is that so. When I grow up, I want to be an inspiration to all people. Especially ones who have been bullied and hurt and depressed all the time. I guess it's true what they say, the good people in this world go through the storm and harsh conditions for a while before they get to the good things in life. My heart is nothing more than a instrument that people can play, as what the devil will tell me. But Jesus will tell me that my heart is beautiful and pure like a fresh red petal rose. Sometimes I don't know who to believe. I know that u might say that I'm selfish and people go through ten times worser. But they always keep a smile on their face. U are only as good as u feel. I feel like just...well...nothing. That's all there is...nothing. Lord I stay humble but I am on the edge of breaking down. I need somebody's help. Can anyone come save me. I have made some bad choices myself but at least I try to fix it. If anyone reads this I need your help. Please don't use me like a puppet. Look at me. What u see is a person crying out for help. Please don't act like u care. If you're going to be there then be there don't leave me. U just might be the miracle that I have been looking for all this time. So the next time u look at me, try to always have a smile on your face and don't worry. I will always love u and don't let anyone tell u that u aren't beautiful. If they do then u know that they are lying. Don't end up like me. So down that there isn't a sky. Confidence is always key. Don't forget. U have to love yourself before u love anybody else. Be the complete opposite of me. Crying to yourself in your room. Crying before u sleep. Thinking suicidal thoughts. Thinking of what could have been better. What did I do to deserve this? U are a beautiful calipilier that is about to spring into a beautiful butterfly. Don't miss out on that chance. As I will say again , love yourself before you love everyone else. Thank u for understanding.
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