adriangarcia

There is a little monster that creeps into your mind. It sits upon a block that reads, “I take my time.” When you're not looking, it searches for your writing. ...

Trying to write something, I am sitting in my study Looking for inspiration, I find scrunched up papers on the ground, The ink in my pen is running dry, the ...

Faux replaces where reality once dwelled as I pray, that one day, my time will come. The nights when I’m supposed to be sleeping, are spent dreaming about Mr. Anonymous; ...

This is, at best, an OK poem. Take away the angst and what do you have? Try editing this later. You might find that this poem exists solely on emotion ...

I think, maybe, I don't like it. I can't make up my mind. It is emotionally driven' and, therefore, as a reader, I can't fully understand what's going on. Make ...

Hmmmm ... I don't know how I feel about this. Which is either a good or bad thing. Before I read it, I thought I'd hate it. While reading it, ...

First, let me tell you, try to stay away from subjects such as death, suicide, and overwhelming emotion. Why? Because, as a writer, you become too muddled with your own ...

I kind of like this poem. However, I also kind of didn't. At first, I didn't like it. It was too generic. And, I couldn't read it without getting bored. ...

At first glance, hated it. Second glance, loved it. A problem you will face and I have no doubt someone will mention this after me is grammer. Specifically, punctuation. I ...

It was a good poem. The only problem I have with this is that I find myself not wanting to read it again. Not even a second glance. Whether it ...

Overall, it was a sweet poem. Nothing grand or lyrical. The biggest problem is that it is forgettable. Even writing this, I can barely recall a word of it. Not ...

Well if I am going to honest in order to help you then I have to say I disliked this poem greatly. I'm not going to go in a whole ...

This may sound a little harsh but I hated it. The entire poem sounded amateur. Too amateur. The idea of red roses becoming black roses ... healing chocolates ... love ...

Not great. I felt the ending was a little rushed. And, I like short poems. However, if it was any longer I would have surely disliked it also. It is ...

Good Poem. Not my cup of tea, however, I did like it. For the type of poem that it is, I felt it was very relavent. I'm actually glad that ...