adriangarcia

Of Mice and Men is one of my favorite novellas of all time. And, I thoroughly enjoyed analyzing it in Literature class. School doesn't ruin novels; deadlines to read novels ...

This is a well written poem and I applaud you for taking the time to re-edit as most people will just 'crank' a poem out and think it's perfect without ...

This was very poorly written. I assume you wrote it in a hurry, because there is no grammar and a lot of misspellings. I suggest not posting things like this ...

Come, shadowed dreams Lock away my sanity Descend, darkening breath Fill me ‘til there’s nothing left. Whispers echo in my ears Drifting in to confirm my fears. Footsteps gather outside ...

I see them there, pretty faces, stylish hair. I look at you, you're not the same, and yet I still know not your name. I wish I had the balls ...

Try breaking this into stanzas ... It looks and in some instances sounds like a prose. I, also, suggest editing this immensely. It was a very morbid. I understand that ...

Love and Bubblegum Love is like choosing bubblegum while wearing a blindfold. Some will be sour, and some will be sweet. He might betray you or he might enchant you. ...

I have to say I liked this story, and this kind of story really isn't my cup of tea. However, I did like it. However ... The first paragraph is ...

Bach is bright but you are brighter leafing through history in the wrong way. Your eyes are nice when left unrubbed and there are no drugs a perfect "o" in ...

I like this poem a lot. You tread on very thin water. You could have made a very angst, emotional poem with absolutely no base; however, you somehow managed to ...

Very interesting! You had me from beginning to end! Which, I'll let you know, is an accomplishment since I usually loose interest half-way through! Grammar was lackluster. Content was exciting. ...

Well-written and executed. I applaud the side note notifying readers of your inspiration and including a visual. I thought the two paralleled quite beautifully. The French blended nicely and it ...

Will we not stand up? For kids wallowing in poverty? While we are complaining about food ready to be consumed, They try convincing themselves that hunger does not exist. We ...

She chose to walk alone the others watched in a distance she wished she were a bird so she can fly away the others whispered about her some claimed she ...

First of all, I'm not going to comment on a pen name. I prefer you keeping YOUR name. But, that's just me. :) Second of all, I really like this ...