abelgaiya

Yeah, there's an edit button by the right-hand side of your submission.

A nice description of love at first sight.

Nice short piece. Instead of '..the black sky like flowers', it would've been better to write 'like blossoming flowers' (just my opinion). But all the same, it's a great short. ...

O_o I suggest posting rants in the blog area. But if you had developed this into a story comprising of past events which involved the cat, to make it seem ...

Thanks for the review guys. For you all who think the vocabulary is too wide, it's because most of the characters are supposed to be elite. Besides, all the words ...

Thanks for the review. Well, I didn't plan to modify the piece because I wrote it without plans, and I really don't know much about poetry - stanzas, lines etc. ...

I never realized there was such intensity to this sentence.

Hey, thanks for the review and for enjoying my piece. Warder is how it's spelt in UK English. Since we use British English in my country, most of the spellings ...

Yes, your technique is nice, but you might want to work on your description. How did he stand up? Did he fart when he stood up? So many questions left ...

Thanks for the pointers. I'll apply them ASAP :)

Thanks for the pointers. I'll apply them ASAP :)

Thanks Lycando :) I've also been enjoying your reviews so far!

Hey, thanks, for the pointers and for the overall review. I'm glad you liked the story, and I'll make sure you're kept abreast on new posts.

Thanks a lot for the tips. I'll make sure I act on them.

As always Lycando, your review was helpful. I intend to keep this story going on for sometime. Cheers