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abelgaiya

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Empathy

    This was really mind-boggling. As I type, I'm still trying to fully understand what I just read. The end was also fantastic. Your idea is quite creative and stirs up ...

    Sun May 25, 2014 9:33 pm
  • Short Story » Science, Spiritual Re: Scientificity of the Spiritual

    Thanks for the exciting laud.

    Mon Jun 17, 2013 1:18 pm
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Smiling Man

    Thou shalt not covert thy neighbour's avatar >_

    Sun May 05, 2013 6:52 pm
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Spiritual Re: When Souls Become Demonic

    Thanks for the pointers. In most Commonwealth countries (which my country is) a full stop is not used with the title.

    Thu May 02, 2013 6:55 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Abrupt Memories

    I never knew you were this good. I may not be a connoisseur of poetry but I know that your flow of emotions, use of descriptions, and rhyming is simply ...

    Thu May 02, 2013 6:29 am
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Spiritual Re: When Souls Become Demonic

    Thanks for the review. 'Daemon' was intended, as it is truly a word.

    Wed May 01, 2013 4:25 pm
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Spiritual Re: When Souls Become Demonic

    Thanks for the review. 'Daemon' was intended, as it is truly a word.

    Wed May 01, 2013 4:24 pm
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: Green-cell

    Thanks for the pointers. But just to be clear, my country follows the diction of the British. So civilise and colour are actually correct according to English standards. You use ...

    Sun Apr 28, 2013 2:18 pm
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Falling: Prologue

    Thanks for the praises; I'm delighted you like the story. I have published Chapter 1 part a. You must pardon the short length in which it appears:

    Tue Apr 16, 2013 1:01 pm
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Journals of Maynard Ray: The 144 Heavens

    The bible mentioned a 3rd heaven in 2 Corinthians 12:2. This was the premise for the story.

    Fri Apr 12, 2013 10:17 am
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: The Black Eyed Boy

    This was an excellent short story. Although I was disappointed that no one got hurt at the end. The boy's reference to his mother as 'him' was a pretty good ...

    Wed Apr 03, 2013 4:07 pm
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: The Reverends

    Thanks for the corrections. This was the most helpful review.

    Sun Mar 31, 2013 6:19 am
  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Dawn of the Harlem Shake Zombies

    Thanks. Have you seen Leslie Nielson as the President in scary movie 3?

    Wed Mar 27, 2013 7:13 am
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Imagination is Fear

    This was nicely written. Correction: "...maybe it was because her uncle was worse" It should be "...maybe it was because her uncle's condition was worse (or worsened)" Please pardon my ...

    Wed Mar 20, 2013 9:07 am
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Journals of Maynard Ray: Dream Casters

    Thanks for the review. This entry is actually the main character reading the Professor's Journal when a situation requesting knowledge for assessment and creating a solution, arises. If you think ...

    Sun Mar 17, 2013 12:06 am


I just write poetry to throw my mean callous heartless exterior into sharp relief. I’m going to throw you off the ship anyway.
— Vogon Captain (The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy)