abelgaiya

There is an excellent plot lying without an effective way to disclose it. This prologue does not actually give me the feel of expecting the subsequent events of the chapters. ...

The only thing you managed to do here was confuse readers. The title suggests a plot relating to the suffering of an angel; the content shows a messenger (which is ...

This was an unusually interesting piece. The dilemma faced by Dian was pretty illogical, and yet, there seems to be a form ogpf plausibility in it. Although I find it ...

First ofmall, welcome to YWS, and I hope you have a good time here. This story is interesting from one point. You made the thing to have a common half ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! I can see you've wasted no time in submitting a story. This is one of the best works (if not the best) I've read ...

Hi there! It's Abel here to review. And by the way, welcome to YWS. This was a very interesting piece. It's like those children's folklore but with a slight gore ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS, and I hope you have a good time here. I love supernatural stories which include theories explaining the 'true' nature and paradigm of the universe ...

Wow, this was really good. I'm surprised there hasn't been any reviewer here. The classical epitome of the circle of life, or life's chain. I like how the note which ...

Aha, now you've reached the peak of the story. Everything's in place now, and the main plot has been unveiled. Covering the plot until the middle of the story was ...

Yes, this is more like it! The suspense, the drama, the tension, the mystery...all embeded within this chapter. My plan was to quickly glance through and review the few things ...

This was all right, although the significance of the elements is blurred. The general plot is uncertain (regardless of the chapter), as readers donot know whether the story's about John's ...

This was a very interesting and educative piece. I guess there aren't reviewers because the thing's a bit too long and crummy at the beginning. Fortunately, my quest for points ...

Are you kidding?! This made a lot of sense! I really liked the bridge theory and the events it attracts as a result of its accessibility by evil. "There are ...

As the previous reviewer asserted, this story is disturbing. The beginning is a little cliche (although that isn't a problem) that I initially thought it was a symmetry of a ...

Hello. First of all welcome to YWS. This is an interesting topic written in a not-so-appealing way. There are a few problems with your spelling, grammar and tense which I ...