abelgaiya

Those who think A1 is difficult to empathize with miss the point that he was created to have an extremely high IQ, and his existential questions and relational approach are ...

Nice work. Although most people seek to be 'different' than everyone else, some people are more psychologically sensitive than everyone else and can therefore be manipulated in ne way or ...

Interesting story, although not that scary. Kind of reminds me of the weeping angels from the Doctor Who series. I don't agree with one of the reviewers concerning the random ...

Wonderful story you've written. I also like the countdown from the last day of life being the first, to the first day of life being the last. It is also ...

This was interesting, although I find some parts in need of review; for example: "But no one had expected her suicide. Had she foreseen it herself?" How can one not ...

Yes, I agree with the previous reviewers about the story involving too many facts, leaving little or no spaces for emotional stimulation. There are some action-packed areas which seem too ...

This was wonderful. The build-up of suspense, and the fact that this was a child's dilemma added immensely to the magnificence of this piece of work. I think the occurring ...

As the other reviewer said, this is too cliche to be interesting. Most professional writers know very well that the 'only just a dream' premise at the beginning of a ...

Although this was well written (grammatically), the entire thing is still too superficial. The revelation of being a vampire was too abrupt and without proper transition. What was worse was ...

First of all, welcome to YWS. This was funny and interesting. Here are a few errors to be corrected: "I would of [have] fought her and hold [held] her at ...

This was indeed a nice suspense short story. I especially liked this part: "He shouted into the darkness. But the darkness did not reply" However, there are a few errors ...

Well this was quite interesting, and fun to read. Making a popular children's fictional character sound so formal and fun simultaneously was very good. At first I thought that you ...

This was good. Not making any emphasis on the talking cat and elephants was effective on giving letting the readers know that this is a fantasy, and is quotidian in ...

This was interesting, but not captivating. The first two paragraphs are very descriptive of the environment, but I wonder if the descriptions became too much that the luster of it ...

This was marvelous. The plot, the style, the description, the characters, all are just well written. At the beginning where you wrote 'wondering where the experiment went wrong', I took ...