abbyowl

Hello there, Deanie. This is an excellent poem you've made, one of the best I've read in a while! Let's dive into the review, shall we? Each stanza itself is ...

Hey, IncohesiveScribbles! I liked this poem. You did a great job with your rhyme pattern throughout the poem. Sometimes there can be a "stretch" word or line, but you were ...

Hey there! I like this poem. It truly reflects some deep emotions and I really enjoyed some of your lines. In particular, I liked "What tries to be beautiful / ...

Hey there! I think you have a cool idea for a bigger picture symbol, but I'll admit that like fortis, I got a bit lost. From what I gathered, (and ...

Hey there! Glad to hear that you shared this with your English teacher; it's good to get feedback. I have some constructive criticism as well, I hope you find it ...

I thought this was really neat. People get so caught up in what's on their screen and not out their window these days. In other words, you've made a very ...

Hey there, it's abbyowl. Overall, I think this poem is ok, but I have some advice that could make it stronger. This poem is in the romance/romantic category yet I ...

I really enjoyed your poem! I like how it started out as a simple metaphor and it gradually built into a scene in my mind. I could picture every line ...

Hi, Shiney! Well, looks like you get to be the lucky one to get my first review! Overall, I liked this poem! You really analyze this idea of fire being ...