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Hi! Abbie's here to review. I love this story and your tone is light. It's great. There are just some improvements to be made though. First off, the punctuation marks. ...

Hi! Abbie's here for a review. :) First off, you categorized this as a novel and I was surprised to see that it's too short for a novel chapter. Maybe, ...

Hi! I find this story to be witty. I love your idea of making up a story on microbes and giving each of them a personality. Haha! The tone of ...

Hey! I love your story. The opening paragraph is just so captivating and every paragraph makes me want to read more. Good job for that! There are just a few ...

Good start. But, I have a few corrections: "Broken and crumbled leaves fall from above in a small willow, tiny bugs and insects riding over the trees crumbly bark." This ...

I love your poem! I did enjoy reading it. Keep it up! :))

Nice! I super love the poem. You've got a unique style and kudos to you :) Thumbs up! Keep writing :D

I love your title: Passenger Seat. It gives your poem a mystery. I love it! I love how you ended your poem. It was definitely nice. "but you lived in ...

Gosh! It was so beautiful! Well-written. Your imagination was extremely wide. Everything's so magical. You have the hands of a good writer. (Bow) Thumbs up! Keep writing. :)

I liked it. It was a very short story but it made my heart sing again for it makes me remember someone. You made a very good beginning and ended ...

I like your poem. Your words fitted exactly to the emotions. You've really explained a girl's feelings. Maybe, you could only use some punctuations. It would help your poem look ...

I like the structure of your poem, as well as the theme. I like the picture up there which made clear of what you were saying about. Just a suggestion: ...

I can totally relate myself to the poem :) You chose simple words but they did fit to explain your thoughts. I totally love it! Thank you for sharing your ...

aw....I love the poem! It's so cute and full of emotions. Actually, my eyes got blurred while reading this especially the last part - the lines that says you'll do ...

Super like: a poem dedicated to Nate! He sure would be pleased when he learns this. I find no mistakes 'cos I wasn't really looking for any. Writing is to ...