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Re: Virus: Prologue: the first letter
I meant to say condition (as in her virus spreading condition) not whereabouts. She is leaving the notes because she herself cannot go to any people in fear of infection ...
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Re: My little sister
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Re: The Door To Nowhere: Chapter one: The spirit of the Lying forest ALTERNATE VERSION
Also may I ask how my story inspired you?
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Re: The Door To Nowhere: Chapter one: The spirit of the Lying forest ALTERNATE VERSION
I will tell you tho, the second chapter as is doesnt fit this chapter. This is the Alt version and the current chap 2 goes with my original chap 1. ...
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Re: The Door To Nowhere: Chapter one: The spirit of the Lying forest ALTERNATE VERSION
Thank you very much! This version I believe I have removed the flaws from the previous ( example Fews charecter flaws) and I will also be doing this to chapter ...
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Re: The Door To Nowhere: Chapter one: The spirit of the Lying forest ALTERNATE VERSION
Thank you for the review! Im gonna be honest. The inspiration for this story just came to me while I was working. The tittle came to my mind first (The ...
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Re: delightfully Dead
Hello. I would like to give you my honest review and I hope this is helpful First of all, I hate the way you structured this. It messes with my ...
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Re: The Door To Nowhere: Chapter Two: The truth about Nowhere
Oh no, the Alt I have really planned out in my head already Haha
Aug 9, 2019 -
Re: The Door To Nowhere: Chapter Two: The truth about Nowhere
Hey Asith, after I am done with work im going to post what was gonna be my alternate version of this and think of what you think of rhat compared ...
Aug 9, 2019 -
Re: The Door To Nowhere: Chapter Two: The truth about Nowhere
I also thank you deeply as this comment opened up a whole other realm for me. There are places that I wanted to put in doubts, or focus on how ...
Aug 9, 2019 -
Re: The Door To Nowhere: Chapter Two: The truth about Nowhere
Thank you for your review. This review confirmed what i had feared. Im trying to rush to much to get my initial thoughts and ideas out there. I am going ...
Aug 9, 2019 -
Re: The Door To Nowhere: Chapter one: The spirit of the Lying forest
Just telling you cause I'm intersted to see how you receive it, the next chapter is up
Aug 9, 2019 - Re: sour wings Aug 8, 2019
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Re: And then it goes
I'll try my best to review this. From my first look its nothing special, just a short fact that you see as truth. I dont find much from reading this ...
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Re: And then it goes
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