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Re: after the war
Ok. I enjoyed this (I have not listened to the soundtrack) I do have to say, however, Your rhyme pattern seems broken. The verses show thier message fine but the ...
Aug 8, 2019 -
Re: doctor who - the revenge part 2
Ok. So. The first sentence is a major run on, and your many spelling errors and even missed words break up the full chapter so much. The grammer and tense ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 4
Before I start my review I must say. All I have read is this Chapter From what I read I am drawn in. Even in a mid chapter, you have ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: the harsh reality of school (based on true events that have happned at school to me)
I read this and first i will do a shallow review. Your structure seems broken. Alot of run ons, misspellings and grammar errors. Overall your point comes across decently but ...
Aug 6, 2019 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Twenty Two
All i have read is this chapter and im not much for this type of fantasy work but the description and detail is great. A few parts felt slightly unnecessary ...
Aug 6, 2019 -
Re: Leave But Never Return
This is very intersted but im failing to find a point. If there is more to this story then I have not read it yet. From this alone I am ...
Aug 5, 2019