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Hi Tale ^_^ It wasn't until I was 12 years old before I met my Grandfather for the first time. I heard stories about the man ever since I can ...

Hey Bethan ^_^ Sophie was a pretty girl, dressed in a boyish fashion. She had tanned olive skin that stood out against her piercing aqua blue eyes. Her dark brown ...

Hi Leaky, I smiled to myself , it was one of my favorites. You can remove “to myself” because this is implied by Parker being in stealth mode lol I ...

Saen ^_^ Cass' grief still remained as they walked to Lira's room, but the combination of the beautiful sights and Aspen briefly slipping her hand in to her own helped ...

Hey Kitty, The faint, calming sound of birds chirping nearby soothed my ears. The warmth of probable sunlight embracing my face gave me a wonderful feeling like I've been whisked ...

Hey Aly, I really like your writing style. You have a nice pace and you’re just a very well-rounded writer in general! Two small comments: that it was indeed an ...

Hey Rkm, One morning, in the central park of the city a young busker took his guitar out of it‘s case , and sat down on a small stool and ...

Hey, Sebastian dusted his T-shirt and pants before entering his home, as he didn't want his parents to think he was a bad boy, getting involved in fights and all. ...

Hello, Sebastian's mom brought some orange juice and served it to her husband i.e., Sebastian's dad. In the meantime, Sebastian got dressed in the grey t-shirt and black track pants ...

Hello Eros, I've seen you around a lot but never reviewed any of your writing ^_^ That was a passion for games. He played it not just for passing the ...

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Hi Saen They were reminiscent of something she might have seen back on Earth, the only indicator of that not being the case being the strange blue tint to the ...

Hi Pan ^_^ Please excuse my small nitpicks should there be any. Gaivmatreau cocked fes head; it was easy to imagine eyes narrowing behind the mask. Nice. Respect for using ...

Howdy, Zita was no angel, but she never claimed to be. An angel would have smote Titin and Foy by now with its heavenly wrath. I feel “its” is a ...

Hi Poppy, My world didn’t end with a bang or even a scream, but rather one secret at a time. Great opening line. Immediately sets the tone and world of ...