Zontafer

Hello, Zontafer as requested. Nitpicks ...I knew what he was doing, and to say I disapproved of it would be an understatement This sentence was a little weird to me, ...

Hello! Zontafer here to review your work! First I want to say that I read your first draft of chapter one, and the story in this is better than your ...

Hey fortis! Zontafer here to review as requested! I'll try a different style of reviewing now, so I'll be reviewing as I write. Nitpicks The prints suggested that there were ...

Here as requested! Great start! I loved the fact that you told us you wouldn't tell about how the blood soaked into the carpet, and her brain pieces splattering on ...

A great poem! It looks like you have thought well through your words in this poem. You have a nice vocabulary, using different words so the reader don't get bored. ...

Hello, Zontafer here to review your work! Joebot really got many points, as well the past people, so I'll focus on the things that are positive in this review. Title: ...

Hello there! I took a look at your portfolio, and chose to review this since your other works had so many reviews. c'x You are really great when it comes ...

Hello, Zontafer here to give you a review! At the very beginning, you tell us about all the 'Touches''. When I read this text, it felt a little bit too ...

Wow, this was a great prologue, Tenyo! I really liked your first sentence: ''It is the first law of a lawless world that the brave always die young.'' It was ...

Hello, Zontafer here to give you a short review! First of all I notice that you are good to start your sentences with different words, instead having sentences like ''I ...

Hello, I'm gonna give you a short review! You're pretty good at keeping the reader interested in your work, but that may be because of the length of the chapters. ...

Hello there! I'm gonna give you a short review, this is my first review on an essay, so don't have your hopes too high! I never read articles, but the ...

Hello, Zontafer here to give you my LAST review of the Review Day! You have a done a great job with this poem, delivering a beautiful flow and imagery. The ...

Wow. You've written an emotional story, with mentioned below, a powerful message. I have a friend which used to cut herself because of bullying and low self-esteem. I do believe ...

Hello, Zontafer here to give you a review! I liked this poem, it had a dark feeling. I'm not sure if you mean to have a comma between ''best'' and ...