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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: When I Was Anna - 2

    Hey Carlito! Zenith here for a short review. Well, since you asked for comments on the bigger Picture. I like it upto now. I mean the flow is good and ...

    Jun 9, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Some Days

    Hey ChipsMcCoy! Zenith here for a review. Firstly, I would like to say that you have a great poem here. Even the first line about being two kids instantly catches ...

    May 27, 2019
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: In a Love Hate Relationship, Where's the Line?

    Hey AutoPilot! What's better than a review on the Review Day. So, here I go... Starting with the flaws, I feel some of your sentences could be cut short. Since ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer

    Hey AS04! First of all, welcome to YWS. Hope you're having a good time here. Your poem is sweet and refreshing like summer itself. It reads well except for a ...

    May 13, 2019
  • Art » Fanfiction, General Re: Winterfell

    Hey Tenyo! Zenith here for a short review. Though considering the fact I haven't watched Winterfell, I may not have deciphered some reference to the show you have made. So ...

    May 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Scared

    Hey Bellarke! Zenith here for a short review. First of all, I would like to point out the minor errors that you would figure out anyway if you reread it. ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Green Forest

    Hey Ishan212! Zenith here for a review. First of all, I liked the structure of your article, it kind of made it more interesting. Conveying what prompted you to write ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Nightmare

    Hey FireSpyGirl! Zenith here for a short review. This piece here is quite a description. You have used imagery, metaphor and other kinds of literary devices all of which have ...

    Apr 2, 2019
  • Other » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: The end

    Hello Kostia! Zenith here for a review. Well I think it's a great piece and almost made me wonder where the rest of it is. It conveys pretty deep ideas, ...

    Mar 29, 2019


Uh, Lisa, the whole reason we have elected officials is so we don't have to think all the time. Just like that rainforest scare a few years back: our officials saw there was a problem and they fixed it, didn't they?
— Homer Simpson