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Re: When I Was Anna - 2
Hey Carlito! Zenith here for a short review. Well, since you asked for comments on the bigger Picture. I like it upto now. I mean the flow is good and ...
Jun 9, 2019 -
Re: Some Days
Hey ChipsMcCoy! Zenith here for a review. Firstly, I would like to say that you have a great poem here. Even the first line about being two kids instantly catches ...
May 27, 2019 -
Re: In a Love Hate Relationship, Where's the Line?
Hey AutoPilot! What's better than a review on the Review Day. So, here I go... Starting with the flaws, I feel some of your sentences could be cut short. Since ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: Summer
Hey AS04! First of all, welcome to YWS. Hope you're having a good time here. Your poem is sweet and refreshing like summer itself. It reads well except for a ...
May 13, 2019 -
Re: Winterfell
Hey Tenyo! Zenith here for a short review. Though considering the fact I haven't watched Winterfell, I may not have deciphered some reference to the show you have made. So ...
May 12, 2019 -
Re: Scared
Hey Bellarke! Zenith here for a short review. First of all, I would like to point out the minor errors that you would figure out anyway if you reread it. ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: The Green Forest
Hey Ishan212! Zenith here for a review. First of all, I liked the structure of your article, it kind of made it more interesting. Conveying what prompted you to write ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Nightmare
Hey FireSpyGirl! Zenith here for a short review. This piece here is quite a description. You have used imagery, metaphor and other kinds of literary devices all of which have ...
Apr 2, 2019 -
Re: The end
Hello Kostia! Zenith here for a review. Well I think it's a great piece and almost made me wonder where the rest of it is. It conveys pretty deep ideas, ...
Mar 29, 2019
