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  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: 550 words from page 198 of ma book

    Hey, So I have a question for you. Why do you only post 500 hundred words at a time? Is it that you want help on those parts or are ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Legend Keepers: PhoenixSight Chapter 1

    Hey, So here it goes. I really enjoyed this. It was cute and very well described. the descriptions were steller. I could imagine the whole thing very clearly which is ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 2: New Life (Revised)

    Hey, So first things first you have so much potential! I can see you really enjoy writing and you remind me of myself when I was your age. But when ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Science Fiction Re: As It All Falls Into Darkness - Prologue

    Hey, so this has defiantly caught my attention. I know this is a prologue but I don't know ow I feel about how it written with the you's and I's. ...

    Jun 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Take Me Back To Salem [Part 1: The Request]

    Hey, So this is so gooood! I love this and I want more. I have really no good Idea on what is truly going on and I think that is ...

    Jun 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Horror Re: The Start of a Legend

    Hey, So I have to say I know lots about Jack the Ripper and have read into the case many many times, so needless to say your story intrigued me. ...

    Jun 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 2

    Hey, Thank you for giving me something to review I've been wanting to do this for awhile. First things first you are a very talented writer and this was great. ...

    Jun 13, 2016
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: More Than Fiction

    Hey, This was beautiful. I really just don't have words. I know this is not something I should review and I won't because I wouldn't want anything about it to ...

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My new av

    Hey, So there is not much to write here review wise because there is not much here but that is the purpose of this isn't. Haikus are meant to be ...

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Two Punched Holes

    It's weird that this hasn't been reviewed yet. It's really good. the words flowed well with the story and everything had a great feeling to it. you could clearly tell ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: The Monsters Inside My Head- Introduction

    There isn't much to really review on besides basic grammar and structure and your pretty sound in that section. I do have to give you props for making you character, ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Realisation

    I thought this was very lovely. I can not only see the pain but I can feel it as well. It was beautifully written and the words were almost lyrical. ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: It'll Be Okay

    it was good all and all, but I do have some things to say if you don't mind. first things first, is this a short story? I feel as though ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Sometimes, It Isn't What It Looks Like.

    Hey, Zee here! First things first welcome to our wonder home ;) Jk but it kinda is a home for us lonely writers. Well second thing, I loved your description. ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I Am Nothing

    I'm sorry. I'm sorry that something bad happened to you, but the poem, This hit home. I can't say I know exactly what this is about but I took it ...

    Apr 1, 2015


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