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Re: 550 words from page 198 of ma book
Hey, So I have a question for you. Why do you only post 500 hundred words at a time? Is it that you want help on those parts or are ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Legend Keepers: PhoenixSight Chapter 1
Hey, So here it goes. I really enjoyed this. It was cute and very well described. the descriptions were steller. I could imagine the whole thing very clearly which is ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 2: New Life (Revised)
Hey, So first things first you have so much potential! I can see you really enjoy writing and you remind me of myself when I was your age. But when ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: As It All Falls Into Darkness - Prologue
Hey, so this has defiantly caught my attention. I know this is a prologue but I don't know ow I feel about how it written with the you's and I's. ...
Jun 13, 2016 -
Re: Take Me Back To Salem [Part 1: The Request]
Hey, So this is so gooood! I love this and I want more. I have really no good Idea on what is truly going on and I think that is ...
Jun 13, 2016 -
Re: The Start of a Legend
Hey, So I have to say I know lots about Jack the Ripper and have read into the case many many times, so needless to say your story intrigued me. ...
Jun 13, 2016 -
Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 2
Hey, Thank you for giving me something to review I've been wanting to do this for awhile. First things first you are a very talented writer and this was great. ...
Jun 13, 2016 -
Re: More Than Fiction
Hey, This was beautiful. I really just don't have words. I know this is not something I should review and I won't because I wouldn't want anything about it to ...
Jun 4, 2016 -
Re: My new av
Hey, So there is not much to write here review wise because there is not much here but that is the purpose of this isn't. Haikus are meant to be ...
Jun 3, 2016 -
Re: Two Punched Holes
It's weird that this hasn't been reviewed yet. It's really good. the words flowed well with the story and everything had a great feeling to it. you could clearly tell ...
Jan 18, 2016 -
Re: The Monsters Inside My Head- Introduction
There isn't much to really review on besides basic grammar and structure and your pretty sound in that section. I do have to give you props for making you character, ...
Jan 18, 2016 -
Re: The Realisation
I thought this was very lovely. I can not only see the pain but I can feel it as well. It was beautifully written and the words were almost lyrical. ...
Jan 18, 2016 -
Re: It'll Be Okay
it was good all and all, but I do have some things to say if you don't mind. first things first, is this a short story? I feel as though ...
Jan 18, 2016 -
Re: Sometimes, It Isn't What It Looks Like.
Hey, Zee here! First things first welcome to our wonder home ;) Jk but it kinda is a home for us lonely writers. Well second thing, I loved your description. ...
Apr 1, 2015 -
Re: I Am Nothing
I'm sorry. I'm sorry that something bad happened to you, but the poem, This hit home. I can't say I know exactly what this is about but I took it ...
Apr 1, 2015
