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Hey, so Sue-Anne seems like a classic Texan. She's actually a pretty cool character. Um I can see that there are some problems with spaces in the sentences so that ...

Why? Why kill the mom and Jake? Jake needed a back story man but okay. I'll deal. They got more people but two more died so this was not a ...

So one more dead. Didn't see that one coming...oh wait. It's actually interesting having a person die a chapter because it means the group is going to try and fix ...

So... Was not expecting Adam to die. He was not like a great person but I kinda liked him. Poor Beth she has to have that garbage on her concision ...

Hey back at it again. so This was a good follow up chapter. It kept up the action and introduced new people which is nice. Roy and Jerry remind me ...

Hey, so there is probably not much that I'm going to say that hasn't already been said by the other two reviewers and I'm way to lazy to read what ...

Hey, Okay so this is really well written and I'm glad that I dug around for it. the descriptions are really well done along with paragraphing. It was a longer ...

Hey, So this seems like it would have a really interesting plot line but I'm a bit confused. So i'm pretty sure this is part one but I feel like ...

Hey, So I don't know why this hasn't been reviewed yet but it should. It's awesome! I really like the story line so far. The character development is very well ...

Hey, This is pretty cool. I'm not sure what exactly is going on but It should be cleared up in other chapter. Your description is well done and the flash ...

Hey, so this is so cute! Like I'm dying. I was listening to one of my favorite songs and i usually have to just stop reading to sing along but ...

Hey, So this is probably really lame but I couldn't finish it. it was really good and super interesting but I have a short attention span and it is very ...

Hey, This was really good! Do you often read old poetry because I could very easily see elements of like really old words, structure, and even a theme. The words ...

Hey, This was so cute! I really liked how you described everything in such detail. Like when she was talking about the sky and how she saw it differently when ...

Hey, So I don't really know how this was supposed to be written. At first it kinda seemed like it should be written like a screen play but then the ...